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I'm a student at Class 1 Grade 1. I am going to the park with my teachers and classmates.
Miss. ye is telling a stories near the lake. Some girls are singing and songing under the tree. My friends Mary and Sally are reading books next to the beach, and other boys are taking photos next to the lake. Other children are rowing boats in the lake. We are having a good time in the park.
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Hello,I am a student.Today is Sunday,we are playing in a park.MrYe is telling stories on the lake side.Some girls are singing and songing under the tree. My friends Mary and Sally are reading books next to the beach, and other boys are taking photos next to the lake. Other children are rowing boats in the lake.This is a nice Sunday.

Hello,everyone,I am a student.Today is Sunday,we are playing in a park.MrYe is telling stories on the lake side.Some girls are singing and songing under the tree. My friends Mary and Sally are reading books next to the beach, and other boys are taking photos next to the lake. Other children are rowing boats in the lake.This is a nice Sunday.