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July 12, Saturday Fine
Today my classmates and I took a trip to Nanjiao Park .It took us a hour to get there by bus. After we arrived there, we began to climb the hill,singing happily. We played some interesting games on top of the hill. we both enjoyed ourselves very much.
We had our picnic at noon .In addition, we had an activity that we talked to the visitors about the importance of protecting the environment. we went back.at around 4 in the afternoon
It is today that we realized we did a good deed.We are looking forward to having such a good trip again.

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Today is a sunny. My classmates and I had a pleasant trip to Nanjiao Park. In the morning, we took 1 hour car from our school to the destination – the scenic Nanjiao Park. There we climbed up the mountain, sang songs and played various games. After enjoying the lunch, we also organized an activity to conduct propaganda the importance of environmental protection. Finally we returned back at 4:00pm. Today we really had a good time!

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July 12, Saturday Fine

Today I went on a trip to Nanjiao Park with all my classmates. After an hour’s ride, we arrived there. As soon as we got there, we began to climb the hill. All the way up, we sang happily. On top of the hill, we played some interesting games. All of us enjoyed ourselves very much.

After we had our picnic at noon, we organized an activity, talking to the visitors about the importance of protecting the environment. At about 4 in the afternoon we returned.

We not only had a good time but also did a good deed today. Though I am tired now, I feel quite happy.