求英语高手帮我写篇英语作文。加分！！

Hello,boys and girls ! My name is Li Mei .I comes from Guangdong and i'm fifteen years old now .So i'm a middle school student .I have a lot of hobbies .For example ,play soccer,listen to the music ,draw and so on . Do you have the same hobbies ? However,i want to talk with foreigners in English .So i'm studying English hard in school .But it is really difficult for me !I know fewer words and i'm not good at English pronounciation .So i don't know how to improve my English grades .Could you give some suggestions ! Please write to me soon!
希望磨卖可以帮到你
看在我是贺野一个一个字打出来的份上，行行好吧禅游喊！

dear sir/Madame
my name is limei,a fifteen Middle-school teenager from guangdong Provence. My feverate thing outside the classes are football music painting etc.
I am writing to you for the following things:
I am learning english in my school.But I feel difficult whenever I am trying to speek(or communicate) with the english men. Even I know a lot of words.but I can't pronounce them well.I am so anxious about how can I improve my english. could you give me a hand ?
I am looking forward your reply.
yours sincerely
limei

Hi,I am a middle school student,and a 15 years old girl,called Limei.I comes from Guangdong province.I have many hobbies,sucn as playing football,listening to the music and drawing,etc（等等）.

I am good at math and chinese.But I am so frustrated(沮丧的)
,because my English study is not good.I need some helps,I am studying in my school now.And I want to communicate with foreigners but it's difficult for me.Although I know quite a few（不少的） vocabulary ,my pronunciation is very poor.I feel very anxious（着急） while（但是） I have no idea to deal with（解决） this situation（情况）闭销.I need some helps,please write to me soon.

Yours ,sincerely（真诚的）
Limei
希望帮到你。 不会可以败数M我，不知道你的要求是不是这些轿枯游。

Dear XX

How are you ? My name is Limei.i'm study in Guangdong and 15 years old.I have many hobbies.Such as playing football,listening the music and drawing..Now i am learing English and I want to chat with foreigner ,But I feel difficult.Because my oral English is bad and I am worry about it.I don't know how to improve my English .I hope you can give me a hand.
尊敬的XX：
你好，我叫李梅，我在广东读书，15岁~我有很多爱好，例如踢足球，听音乐和画画。现在我正在学习英语，我想与外国人交流此芹羡。但是我感觉到困难，因为我的口语不好，我很担心。我不知森拍道如何提高我的英语水平。我首神希望你能帮助我~

good morning, my name is jack, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview, i would like to answer whatever you may raise, and i hope i can make a good performance today, eventually enroll in this prestigious university in september. now i will introduce myself briefly,i am 21 years old,born in heilongjiang province ,northeast of china,and i am curruently a senior student at beijing XX uni.my major is packaging engineering.and i will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in june.in the past 4 years,i spend most of my time on study,i have passed CET4/6 with a ease. and i have acquired basic knowledge of packaging and publishing both in theory and in practice. besides, i have attend
several packaging exhibition hold in Beijing, this is our advantage study here, i have taken a tour to some big factory and company. through these i have a deeply understanding of domestic packaging industry. compared to developed countries such as us, unfortunately, although we have made extraordinary progress since 1978,our packaging industry are still underdeveloped, mess, unstable, the situation of employees in this field are awkard. but i have full confidence in a bright future if only our economy can keep the growth pace still. i guess you maybe interested in the reason itch to law, and what is my plan during graduate study life, i would like to tell you that pursue law is one of my lifelong goal,i like my major packaging and i wont give up,if i can pursue my master degree here i will combine law with my former education. i will work hard in
thesefields ,patent ,trademark, copyright, on the base of my years study in department of p&p, my character? i cannot describe it well, but i know i am optimistic and confident. sometimes i prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but i am not lonely, i like to chat with my classmates, almost talk everything ,my favorite pastime is valleyball,playing cards or surf online. through college life,i learn how to balance between study and entertainment. by the way, i was a actor of our amazing drama club. i had a few glorious memory on stage. that is my pride.